The Falling Firestones
The Falling Firestones
Under the big dark blue sheet
with several white spots,
and my camera in hand
and a mind full of thoughts;
between these spots
I was in search of a line,
and wanted it in my camera
as a memory of mine;
but they were more smarter
and faster than me,
even faster than the time for
holding a cup of tea;
but at last there
was no loss for me,
it was just a new leaf
on my knowledge tree;
we often stood beside our friend
to check who is tall,
but also forgot that in the sight of
universe we are very small.
-Lochan Chugh
-Lochan Chugh
4 January 2019; 1:34am
Star at rise ...nice efforts ,keep writing
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ReplyDeleteThe last line touched so hard ! really great bratha:D:D
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